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Feedback?
Written by Matt Fradd   
Sunday, 14 February 2010

Greetings all,

We are putting together some rough drafts for some pull-up banners we'll be making for our conferences and talks. Here are three drafts. We'd love your feedback & criticisms. Thanks.


banner-preview1_2banner-preview1banner-preview

Comments
  • Isaac  - yes
    avatar
    survey says yes to both
  • Isaac
    avatar
    o and matt, these just reminded me. Long story short i got permission in my neiborhood to completely tag a garage door
    for backdrops and promotions. is there anything that you would like us to do with it in particular and such, we could
    EASILY do the fight porn fist and the porn effect address. Im picking up the spray paint today but if you have anything
    in the works that could be assisted by photos or video of street promotion let me know, otherwise we'll just go nuts.
  • SJ4  - feedback
    Is there a particular reason for the banners being in pink? Pink for the website logo makes sense to me because it
    recalls neon signs for cheap hotels, but I don't see the reason for using pink in the banners.

    Also, in the second
    banner, is the silhouette of a man or a woman? It's a little ambiguous (at least to me). Is that intentional?
  • Matt Fradd
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    SJ4 what do you think of the 3rd banner?
  • Ciaran Myers  - Vote
    I like the second one.
    With the silhouette of the standing woman facing you straight on.
  • Bill  - Um???
    To be completely honest I objectively dislike them all. I read the first one as "Effect porn the"; The message
    on the second and third almost makes "Emasculating Men, Degrading Women, Destroying Marriages" as a motto or a
    tagline for the ministry. To correct that you could do something like "PORN: Emauscu....". That would give the
    slogan reference.

    As far as the art goes I like it all. It's all very well produced.
  • Katie
    I like the second one with the woman facing straight on
  • Sharon  - Looks great!
    I like the third the best it makes you look more than once
  • Doug  - 3rd one
    The first one looks cool but doesn't make much sense...a fist? The second one looks like an old lady.
    I like the 3rd
    one. Provocative
  • Stephen  - Vote
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    I like the first poster. The fighting fist is a more powerful reminder that this site is about fighting opposed to the
    silhouette of the woman who reminds us of porn itself. Does that make sense? Also maybe the words could go on the first
    poster?

    Just my two cents!
  • Luke Gilkerson  - 3rd one
    I like the third one the best. First one doesn't make sense because the wording at the top looks backwards to me. The
    second one is nice, but not as eye-catching.
  • Moniker  - First
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    I agree with Stephen on the first poster. However, I do think the text should be changed because I don't think it is
    used efficiently. As men, I think the 'fighting' that the fist suggests is very appealing.
  • Anthony  - Some thoughts.
    While I agree that the fist does appeal to a man's sense of standing up against tyranny and oppression (two adjectives
    that properly describe the porn industry). I fear that the average joe wont make the connection between the title and
    the fist... It may be taken that you are in support of porn and that the fist is a sign of uprising against us sheltered
    little prudes who visit such websites as this.
  • Anthony  - PS.
    Deffinately the 3rd one.
  • Erika
    3rd. No doubt
  • phatcatholic  - neither
    I don't like any of them. The first one has the words in the wrong order. Perhaps the point is that masturbation is
    "gravely disordered" or that porn is a twisting of reality? Even so, I don't think your average person is
    intuitive enough to get it. Also, can we present the "standing up and fighting against" theme without using a
    fist? I think the image of a fist has too much baggage, and sexual innuendo attached to it. It came off as crude to me.
    The second one just adds a layer of unnecessary confusion, seeing as it is not immediately clear what the image in the
    middle is a silhouette of. The third one has a silhouette of a woman in a provocative pose, which may actually bring
    about the effect that we are trying to overcome.
  • Matt Fradd  - phatcatholic
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    Not gonna lie phatcatholic, you've put more thought into this that we have. Thanks for your feedback man.
  • Colin  - Feedback
    I like the second and the third one the most. Between the second and the third Id have to go with the third one hands
    down. It catches the eye a lot more effectively than the second one does. The angle is more interesting too. Instead of
    just a flat frontal shot of a person you have an angled shot. It just seems more interesting to look at. If I were to go
    with any of the three, Id say go with the third one, its by far the best in my opinion.

    I like the use of pink as well
    as the slogan "emasculating men, degrading women, destroying marriages". Its very powerful. I think you should
    keep that slogan in whatever poster you decide to use.

    As for the first poster I dont like it all that much.
    Particularly because it doesnt have the slogan, but also because of the way its situated. It feels like it should be
    horizontal and not vertical to me and that the fist should be rotated 90 degrees clock wise, and then the website should
    be centered at the bottom of the poster.

    Hope that helps

    God bless! :)

    Colin
  • Anthony
    I like the third one. At first it seems as if it is luring you in with temptation, but if you look more closely at whats
    said at the bottom then you know that it is anti-pornography.
  • Egoless  - Maybe instead . . .
    Instead of a siloutte of a woman, perhaps a siloutte of a man that looks beaten and broken. I'm very aware there female
    addicts of pornography, but something that really speaks to men, such as man broken down on his knees from the suffering
    that pornography causes can just speak volumes. Just my thoughts Matt.
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